Food Person Essay

I think I earned somewhere in the B- range, maybe even C+. I’m really not entirely sure. I feel like I did a good job describing Nelson’s approach and style, but maybe not as good as a job analyzing it. I tried to add analysis into parts of the biography paragraphs but I’m not sure if it was as fluid as I would have liked. I felt like my analysis seemed a little cheesy at times.

Draft Update

My essay needs a lot of shaping and refining. Not all my sources are cited 100% correct or at all, I need to work on drawing the line between the history of the person and relating their style with sufficient analysis. I just haven’t given this essay enough of my time yet for it to be close to ready.